Cry of a bird

birds700x275_01_21.jpgOnce I was a bird,

With wings to fly high,

With a sigh.

Once I had a beak ,

To hurt the weak,

And to feed the weed,

 But now A meager piece of flesh dried

To be fried

For the might

Of the knight. 

6 Responses to this post.

  1. Now, thats an improvement., you are moving fast :) thats about the poems.
    now , about your blog. you have to start writing on various topics now. ( thats what I believe ) when you have much subjects to write about, you will start making better posts. I expect to read about the books you read, the songs you listen to, your teachers, school, … a lot…

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  2. There is this distinct style of yours in the last three poems. I might call them haiku-ish for want of a better word. I don’t know whether there is a technical term for this style. There should be. It carries a certain detachment in its tone, and I love it.

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  3. Posted by allirekha on August 7, 2007 at 1:34 pm

    i dont get that word, anywaysnice to know u love that.n thanx 4 ur coment n visit :-)

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  5. Posted by Heidi on July 15, 2008 at 12:14 am

    must say that I’m not impressed

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  6. Well im not at all impressed either :P !! thanks for u truthful comment :)

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