Take me O Lord!!

Take me O Lord !!

High up into the heaven

or push me down into the hell

with Thy hands

Take me O Lord!

My works are all done

with what u might call

imperfection

But what through my eyes

Look perfect

Take me O lord!

The pain is conquering

my body

N I’m dead

with thoughts

other than ‘pain’

Take me O lord!

the world is peeping

into my pain with sympathy

Take me O lord!

My nerves are cracking

My Breathe is counted

My eyes are covered with darkness

Take me……

So what made me write?

This is written in no fear of my exam results. :P

Yesterday by 11:15 PM i turned off my computer n then i couldn’t turn my head to the right n when i tried , i could feel some kind of my pain with my nerves on the left of my fore head. And i felt like i m going to die ..thats what i think every time i get some kind of pain :D

To whom should i go?… neurologist or ….. :?

29 Responses to “Take me O Lord!!”


  1. 1 dinu May 8, 2008 at 4:10 pm

    This is definitely exam result fever ………… :P

  2. 2 allirekha May 8, 2008 at 4:16 pm

    No dinkaaa….im nt tht stupid to be afraid of the results
    dont say tht again n again n make me afraid :?

  3. 3 dinu May 8, 2008 at 4:51 pm

    well, thats what I am trying to do.. make u afraid……….

  4. 4 allirekha May 8, 2008 at 5:08 pm

    @Dinu

    Well im nt tht fragile ..u know… :P

  5. 5 littleindian May 8, 2008 at 6:38 pm

    Was it a throbbing pain and only on the left side?
    Did you have problems with your vision? ie blank spaces or flashing lights?
    It is possible you may have had your first episode of migraine. Any physician should be able to help you.

  6. 6 allirekha May 8, 2008 at 9:01 pm

    @ little indian

    omg!!!
    i used to have pain …bt it has never interrupted my movement … no no no..no prob for vision
    thanks for such caring words :) ..

  7. 7 teky May 8, 2008 at 11:43 pm

    this much fear :P you have lot to face…. so u have to be here… don’t ask him to take for stupid things, Stay cool… 8)

  8. 8 allirekha May 9, 2008 at 10:11 am

    Y in the hell do everyone say im afraid :evil:

    Yep , i know i have lot more to face..n im of course having a cool vacation :P

  9. 9 | Balu | May 9, 2008 at 11:16 am

    That was one hell of a poem! But I never used to pray to be taken to hell heaven and all poor god.. I just used him to take me ahead in time.. to a time when I am done with my exams! :-D

  10. 10 Nikhil May 9, 2008 at 12:59 pm

    All The best!!!!!!
    I hope you are the topper!! After a poem like this one, I’m sure you’ll be! :D

  11. 11 Priya May 9, 2008 at 1:16 pm

    Hey! Don’t ask god to take you to heaven/hell and all….ask for something better and fun…you never know, you may just get what you ask for ! ;)
    All the best for results ! Stay Happy !! :D

  12. 12 vishesh May 9, 2008 at 2:17 pm

    to no one…just sit and meditate or well just imagine the zillion probabilities which take place…like getting a call from someone and they congratulating you…it works..

  13. 13 Rekha May 9, 2008 at 2:54 pm

    @Balu
    Yeah ..nt just u,everyone do tht :P

    @Nikhil
    thank u ..
    topper :? no way…i wish if I could top in atleast one of the subjects :)

    @Priya
    Yeah ..he ll gimme if i really deserve :)
    Thank u

    @ Vishesh
    hmmm…….15 more days for the result.. …means half a month, :P n ihave lot more to think other thn my results

  14. 14 vishesh May 9, 2008 at 9:44 pm

    oh…lol..don’t worry…is your school cbse??

  15. 15 allirekha May 10, 2008 at 4:15 pm

    yep :)

  16. 16 teky May 11, 2008 at 12:58 pm
  17. 17 allirekha May 12, 2008 at 12:23 pm

    @ teky
    thanks .. will do tht :)

  18. 18 Nikhil May 12, 2008 at 6:04 pm

    Burp! You have been tagged!! :D

  19. 19 Amit May 13, 2008 at 11:13 pm

    Nice poem. Who says a brain stops working in tension? :D

  20. 20 allirekha May 18, 2008 at 9:47 am

    @ AMIT
    Thanks
    It wont stop working ..i agree,bt in tension it starts working badly, if u got to a doctor he can explain that very well :P

  21. 21 Vasudha May 20, 2008 at 6:47 pm

    If you can write such poems, why be afraid of the exam results? :)

  22. 22 allirekha May 27, 2008 at 6:14 pm

    @ everyone
    I passed with 88%

  23. 23 Amit May 27, 2008 at 9:21 pm

    88%??? 8-O
    Congrats!!!!
    *faints*

  24. 24 allirekha May 28, 2008 at 4:18 pm

    @ Amit
    Thank you..thanks a lot :)
    I m greedy i want more :evil:

  25. 25 Xylene May 29, 2008 at 8:08 pm

    wow. congrats.
    Amit,
    seems like u faint quite often. :D

  26. 26 Amit May 29, 2008 at 8:32 pm

    @Xylene : Yes, I love to faint. I am very filmy. :D
    *faints again* :lol:

  27. 27 allirekha May 29, 2008 at 10:10 pm

    @ Xylene
    thank u :)

    @amit
    i thought only girls do that very often :lol:

  28. 28 Amit May 30, 2008 at 1:31 am

    Now a days, you should do whatever attracts attention of girls. Who knows I might find a girl who throws some water on my face and as soon as I open my eyes, we fall in love. ;)

  29. 29 allirekha June 2, 2008 at 10:54 am

    @ amit
    so that is the moral behind fainting ,,,hmm :D
    well make sure u faint in a girly area :P
    n no need to faint in my blog..im just 15 ;)

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