Just one which is
Enough for the hundred
Just one which can
Spread the fragrance
A hundred miles
Just one which can
Delight a hundred
Just one
For the hundred age
But for the one
Hundred was not enough
And I didn’t search for hundreds
When I found the one
Posted by yogesh on August 3, 2007 at 4:35 pm
accept my thanks from the very core of the heart for some happy lines.
your lines convey so much that if it is negative it really feels bad 🙂
Posted by yogesh on August 3, 2007 at 4:39 pm
hopeful lines ….
you write very well
and if something is negative it really feels bad
thanks 🙂
Posted by mannap on August 3, 2007 at 4:43 pm
very beautiful lines
Posted by allirekha on August 5, 2007 at 5:01 am
thank a looooot for ur comment n visit
And yogesh U r welcome !!….eventhough i dont know y you thanked me…..u feel bad in my lines when i felt bad,i think u could understand the poem from the core
Posted by dinsan on August 6, 2007 at 3:22 am
cute 🙂
Posted by allirekha on August 27, 2007 at 9:35 am
Oh really the one is cute 😉
Posted by RM on August 27, 2007 at 3:39 pm
Your poem”The One” speaks volumes,put in a simple way.I can tell you I can relate to it first hand.I should wish to send it to someone special.Do you think then they will get the hint and understand?
Posted by allirekha on August 28, 2007 at 5:00 am
That depends on the atitude of the one you send, and if u add some more touching lines for sure they will understand……just try ur luck n see 🙂
..anyway thanx 4 ur visit n comment..and if u dont mind lemme know the result also….plssssssss