The wind that takes
When the wind blows
The clouds move away
But unlit the lamp
That lightens my world
And unlit his word
The word
He has kept in my world
The wind opens the window
Through which he peeps
Into my meadow
And feed the sheep deep inside
The wind carries the harshly things
From the marshy beings
That makes me weeping
While he is sleeping
My desert which is always green 
Posted by arvind on September 8, 2007 at 4:27 pm
i dont know what the hell it meant
anyway no offence.. i was ridiculing myself for not understanding anything like that…
as i said. poems aren’t my cup of tea..and i always love finding people creating something like that
Posted by allirekha on September 8, 2007 at 4:30 pm
uhh u dont know what it mean..y..it mean what i have written..the poem has got nothing to dig deep..just what a wind do to a lover 😛
Not to me !!!! 😀
Posted by arvind on September 10, 2007 at 4:29 pm
NOT to YOU..
i have heard love induces creativity..
WELL , that was creative…
😛
So many posts on LOVE
AND u say “not to me ”
HMM.. you make me skeptical..
😀
Posted by allirekha on September 11, 2007 at 11:39 am
Hmm ofcourse arvind ..love towards poems make me write 😛
and love is the base of eveything..i do believe..so many posts about love 😉
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Posted by Arun on September 27, 2007 at 9:55 am
I happened to land this blog. Well your poem reassembles the early poems of Emily Dickinson, an American poet. Pain and the world around was her fav thought filed. Well this is just my suggestion if you happened to read her poems, that would increase your expression level. Poems or Dorothy Wordsworth are also recommended
Arun
Posted by allirekha on September 27, 2007 at 10:20 am
hm this is the second time im hearing about Emily Dickinson in my blog..that make me curious , , i read poems very rarely other than those of my syllabus 😀
And thanks for dropping ur suggestions,will try to read 🙂
Posted by arunchullikkal on September 27, 2007 at 1:17 pm
You gotta read lot…that you can avoid repeated expressions…btb read my site too… I do write some sort of literature
Lols 😀
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