The word in my world

The wind that takes

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When the wind blows

The clouds move away

But unlit the lamp

That lightens my world

And unlit his word

The word

He has kept in my world

The wind opens the window

Through which he peeps

Into my meadow

And feed the sheep deep inside

The wind carries the harshly things

From the marshy beings

That makes me weeping

While he is sleepingΒ 


9 responses to this post.

  1. i dont know what the hell it meant
    anyway no offence.. i was ridiculing myself for not understanding anything like that…
    as i said. poems aren’t my cup of tea..and i always love finding people creating something like that


  2. uhh u dont know what it mean what i have written..the poem has got nothing to dig deep..just what a wind do to a lover πŸ˜›
    Not to me !!!! πŸ˜€


  3. NOT to YOU..
    i have heard love induces creativity..
    WELL , that was creative…
    So many posts on LOVE
    AND u say “not to me ”
    HMM.. you make me skeptical..


  4. Hmm ofcourse arvind towards poems make me write πŸ˜›

    and love is the base of eveything..i do many posts about love πŸ˜‰



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  6. I happened to land this blog. Well your poem reassembles the early poems of Emily Dickinson, an American poet. Pain and the world around was her fav thought filed. Well this is just my suggestion if you happened to read her poems, that would increase your expression level. Poems or Dorothy Wordsworth are also recommended



  7. hm this is the second time im hearing about Emily Dickinson in my blog..that make me curious , , i read poems very rarely other than those of my syllabus πŸ˜€
    And thanks for dropping ur suggestions,will try to read πŸ™‚


  8. You gotta read lot…that you can avoid repeated expressions…btb read my site too… I do write some sort of literature

    Lols πŸ˜€


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