I keep them close to my heart
But make them stay away
From my melancholic chambers
For them to never taste sorrow
In the honey of a flower
The flower that has bloomed in the winter
And that will droop down in the spring
And for them to never make me deaf with their barks
And for them to never make me blind with their colour
And for them to never stir my mind with their waging tail
But close to my heart I keep them to suck the nectar
Posted by dinsan on October 11, 2007 at 1:59 am
so sweeet !!! 🙂 I loved it…
Posted by allirekha on October 12, 2007 at 10:41 am
That may be because ur so sweet ..lol…ur also included in ‘them’ 😉
Posted by arunchullikkal on October 18, 2007 at 3:09 am
You lack reading my friend. I have been reading your poem quiet few times. Just found this, may be a coincident, you write in same paper, same pen, and same expression… You have the skills, it’s needed to be pruned.
Posted by allirekha on October 18, 2007 at 4:32 pm
I take ur comment in the positive sense itself..reading is a habit something that everyone leave in this busy life..bt still this is the time for people like me to read 🙂
but still my poems are simple expression of my feelings
n thanks for dropping ur suggestion 🙂
AND OF COURSE I WILL COME UP!!!! 😉
( with all ur support)
Posted by arvind on October 20, 2007 at 1:32 pm
i am a bit unfortunate that poems aren’t my cup of tea.
i dont know what to comment when u post ur beautiful poems.. 😛
Posted by Suresh Gundappa on October 25, 2007 at 12:35 pm
i love your poem!
write more from heart! you have fabulous potential to become better and better. good site and keep up the good work. I will come back to visit often.
Posted by arvind on October 31, 2007 at 10:46 am
you have been tagged
Posted by Seena Augustine on October 31, 2007 at 11:54 am
I like this poem soo much. It creates some goood feeling in my mind. I feel its touching. Good work.
Posted by allirekha on October 31, 2007 at 12:06 pm
@ Seena
thanks a looooooooot and nice to know that it touches ur heart
@ Suresh
thanks…its ur comments that give me energy to write more n more
@ Arvind,
I didnt expect that arvind
abt the poem..ur lucky enough that u cant understand it 😛
it tastes sorrow somewhere..and the poem is a simple expression of my friend ship and a secret ,i wrote half of the poem watching my dog ..bt still that helped me express some ideas 🙂
Posted by Holidays World on November 8, 2007 at 7:32 am
Nice Blog I really love this poem by heart