Green turns grey
Not at the bay
But as the prey
on the way
They cannot be the shade anymore
They cannot be the bade anymore
they cannot be the food
for the hood
their dreams to fly high
by the sigh
of the one who sleeps them
are burnt
for worn-out deeds
of the greed’s
As if no words
to the lords
they turn grey as their prey
for their gay
at the end of the day
You should feel some difference with the title of the poem as it was the theme for versification competition at school..well I do expect something,even if I know expectations make us sad….the result will be out soon..just can’t wait any longer 🙂
Posted by Nishu on November 19, 2007 at 11:46 am
nice new ..awsome looks ..
Posted by Akhil on November 23, 2007 at 12:46 pm
too good, blasting,fantastic,bombarding
Posted by allirekha on November 23, 2007 at 1:21 pm
I did nt expect such a comment frm u
thanks 🙂
Posted by Vasudha Pande on November 27, 2007 at 4:34 pm
A nice little poem. 🙂
Posted by allirekha on December 5, 2007 at 12:20 pm
HaHa! i lost it in flying colours!
but never will it weaken me bcoz each of ur click to my poems is enough for me 🙂 to write more n more