Tears for each drop

 This is a very special poem for me..I wrote this one early in the morning at 4 AM!!! ..on the day of my science examination n  one more reason ,I wrote this  being influenced by this incident 

It is raining for the past ten days
Making it worthless than hayrice.jpg
It rains in their hut
Tears for each nut
That they cared not for their might
But to live in this fight
No longer could I love
The rain as a my dove
Each drop turned to be their tear
When failure seems to be so near
 

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10 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by abhishekkumartiwari on April 4, 2008 at 8:01 am

    woow..gr8 poetry..
    from where do u get inspiration from..
    like ur thoughts…seems to be very interstin person..
    wud love to know u more////

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  2. pathetic crop failure inspired me to write this poem
    n abt me…nthing tht special n more abt me is in my about page
    Thanks for ur visit n comment 🙂

    Reply

  3. Posted by abhishekkumartiwari on April 4, 2008 at 8:22 am

    can we chat now..if u have no problem..
    id: chitchat_abhishek@yahoo.com
    i’m really bored over here..

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  4. Good one

    future Sugathakumari 🙂

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  5. @ Abhishek
    Sorry abhishek..im nt interested

    @ Dinsan
    hmmm..akiyathannenu manasilayi..
    seriously i dont know much abt sughathakumari 😛
    nyways thnx for u comment

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  6. Posted by abhishekkumartiwari on April 4, 2008 at 3:03 pm

    alright..anywways keep writing..bye

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  7. interesting poem… 🙂
    brings back a lot of memories…

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  8. hmm wt kind of memories 😕

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  9. Posted by Vasudha on May 20, 2008 at 6:51 pm

    nice one. very thoughtful.
    ps. so this is what you do when you should be studying… 🙂

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  10. even if i go on studying , i just cant ignore what happens around ..rite? 🙂

    Reply

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