Take me O Lord!!

Take me O Lord !!

High up into the heaven

or push me down into the hell

with Thy hands

Take me O Lord!

My works are all done

with what u might call

imperfection

But what through my eyes

Look perfect

Take me O lord!

The pain is conquering

my body

N I’m dead

with thoughts

other than ‘pain’

Take me O lord!

the world is peeping

into my pain with sympathy

Take me O lord!

My nerves are cracking

My Breathe is counted

My eyes are covered with darkness

Take me……

So what made me write?

This is written in no fear of my exam results. πŸ˜›

Yesterday by 11:15 PM i turned off my computer n then i couldn’t turn my head to the right n when i tried , i could feel some kind of my pain with my nerves on the left of my fore head. And i felt like i m going to die ..thats what i think every time i get some kind of pain πŸ˜€

To whom should i go?… neurologist or ….. πŸ˜•

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31 responses to this post.

  1. This is definitely exam result fever ………… πŸ˜›

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  2. No dinkaaa….im nt tht stupid to be afraid of the results
    dont say tht again n again n make me afraid πŸ˜•

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  3. well, thats what I am trying to do.. make u afraid……….

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  4. @Dinu

    Well im nt tht fragile ..u know… πŸ˜›

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  5. Was it a throbbing pain and only on the left side?
    Did you have problems with your vision? ie blank spaces or flashing lights?
    It is possible you may have had your first episode of migraine. Any physician should be able to help you.

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  6. @ little indian

    omg!!!
    i used to have pain …bt it has never interrupted my movement … no no no..no prob for vision
    thanks for such caring words πŸ™‚ ..

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  7. this much fear πŸ˜› you have lot to face…. so u have to be here… don’t ask him to take for stupid things, Stay cool… 8)

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  8. Y in the hell do everyone say im afraid πŸ‘Ώ

    Yep , i know i have lot more to face..n im of course having a cool vacation πŸ˜›

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  9. That was one hell of a poem! But I never used to pray to be taken to hell heaven and all poor god.. I just used him to take me ahead in time.. to a time when I am done with my exams! πŸ˜€

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  10. All The best!!!!!!
    I hope you are the topper!! After a poem like this one, I’m sure you’ll be! πŸ˜€

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  11. Hey! Don’t ask god to take you to heaven/hell and all….ask for something better and fun…you never know, you may just get what you ask for ! πŸ˜‰
    All the best for results ! Stay Happy !! πŸ˜€

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  12. to no one…just sit and meditate or well just imagine the zillion probabilities which take place…like getting a call from someone and they congratulating you…it works..

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  13. @Balu
    Yeah ..nt just u,everyone do tht πŸ˜›

    @Nikhil
    thank u ..
    topper πŸ˜• no way…i wish if I could top in atleast one of the subjects πŸ™‚

    @Priya
    Yeah ..he ll gimme if i really deserve πŸ™‚
    Thank u

    @ Vishesh
    hmmm…….15 more days for the result.. …means half a month, πŸ˜› n ihave lot more to think other thn my results

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  14. oh…lol..don’t worry…is your school cbse??

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  15. yep πŸ™‚

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  16. @ teky
    thanks .. will do tht πŸ™‚

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  17. Burp! You have been tagged!! πŸ˜€

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  18. Nice poem. Who says a brain stops working in tension? πŸ˜€

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  19. @ AMIT
    Thanks
    It wont stop working ..i agree,bt in tension it starts working badly, if u got to a doctor he can explain that very well πŸ˜›

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  20. Posted by Vasudha on May 20, 2008 at 6:47 pm

    If you can write such poems, why be afraid of the exam results? πŸ™‚

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  21. @ everyone
    I passed with 88%

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  22. 88%??? 😯
    Congrats!!!!
    *faints*

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  23. @ Amit
    Thank you..thanks a lot πŸ™‚
    I m greedy i want more πŸ‘Ώ

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  24. wow. congrats.
    Amit,
    seems like u faint quite often. πŸ˜€

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  25. @Xylene : Yes, I love to faint. I am very filmy. πŸ˜€
    *faints again* πŸ˜†

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  26. @ Xylene
    thank u πŸ™‚

    @amit
    i thought only girls do that very often πŸ˜†

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  27. Now a days, you should do whatever attracts attention of girls. Who knows I might find a girl who throws some water on my face and as soon as I open my eyes, we fall in love. πŸ˜‰

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  28. @ amit
    so that is the moral behind fainting ,,,hmm πŸ˜€
    well make sure u faint in a girly area πŸ˜›
    n no need to faint in my blog..im just 15 πŸ˜‰

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  29. Posted by Vicky O'Neil on June 24, 2010 at 2:45 am

    Is there a copywrite on the picture of the praying hands on the Bible?
    Can I use the picture for free?

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