I Wonder……

I wonder how the land of life

Will be across this shimmering bluePic by naveen

I wonder how the mysterious sun

Brighten the queen of mermaids

I wonder how the blossoms beneath

Beautify the pearls

I wonder how he sails

Across these five

I wonder, how the lullaby

Of the waves sleeps

The crawling babies

I wonder how she swallows

My words written on her face

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16 responses to this post.

  1. I wonder how you write really nice lines 🙂

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  2. And my name is not Sudarshanan 😀 or you want to call me Sudarshanan? then its ok. I would love to be called anything audible by a sweet girl 😛

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  3. OOOps ..so im so sorry. u r name is sudarshan , well is that rite?
    sudarshanan will be the Malayalam version of sudarshan..u know 😀

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  4. cool. lovely.

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  5. nice thoughts…. keep rocking..

    @Suda
    Me too thought to write the same comment 😛

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  6. @Xylene
    thank you 🙂

    @Teky
    thank u .. 🙂
    n where have u gone…keep writing..missing u

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  7. nice,i love the sea..congrats on your marx 🙂 and thanks for taking care of YU,i was really worried what will happen 🙂

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  8. Beautiful. Lovely play of words. 🙂

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  9. @allirekha:
    Really….! 😛 you will get the answer in my next post within two days…

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  10. Wow!! This is beautiful!!

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  11. @ Vishesh
    Thanks 🙂
    Well its my pleasure to take care..its our blog 🙂

    @ Amit
    Hehehe..play of words! 🙂

    @Teky
    Not really :P..

    @nova
    🙂

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  12. nice one… pakuthi dahichu.. ineeem vayikkatto

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  13. 😛
    ithu njan ezhuthiyathu..avide azhikode monambathu vechatto 😛

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  14. Oho !!! …….. that’s why it came out really good 🙂

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