I wonder how the land of life
Will be across this shimmering blue
I wonder how the mysterious sun
Brighten the queen of mermaids
I wonder how the blossoms beneath
Beautify the pearls
I wonder how he sails
Across these five
I wonder, how the lullaby
Of the waves sleeps
The crawling babies
I wonder how she swallows
My words written on her face
My desert which is always green 
Posted by Suda on June 2, 2008 at 3:36 pm
I wonder how you write really nice lines 🙂
Posted by Suda on June 2, 2008 at 3:38 pm
And my name is not Sudarshanan 😀 or you want to call me Sudarshanan? then its ok. I would love to be called anything audible by a sweet girl 😛
Posted by allirekha on June 2, 2008 at 3:47 pm
OOOps ..so im so sorry. u r name is sudarshan , well is that rite?
sudarshanan will be the Malayalam version of sudarshan..u know 😀
Posted by Xylene on June 3, 2008 at 6:45 pm
cool. lovely.
Posted by teky on June 3, 2008 at 9:23 pm
nice thoughts…. keep rocking..
@Suda
Me too thought to write the same comment 😛
Posted by allirekha on June 3, 2008 at 9:29 pm
@Xylene
thank you 🙂
@Teky
thank u .. 🙂
n where have u gone…keep writing..missing u
Posted by vishesh on June 3, 2008 at 10:46 pm
nice,i love the sea..congrats on your marx 🙂 and thanks for taking care of YU,i was really worried what will happen 🙂
Posted by Amit on June 3, 2008 at 11:57 pm
Beautiful. Lovely play of words. 🙂
Posted by teky on June 4, 2008 at 10:32 am
@allirekha:
Really….! 😛 you will get the answer in my next post within two days…
Posted by Nova on June 4, 2008 at 3:43 pm
Wow!! This is beautiful!!
Posted by allirekha on June 4, 2008 at 3:53 pm
@ Vishesh
Thanks 🙂
Well its my pleasure to take care..its our blog 🙂
@ Amit
Hehehe..play of words! 🙂
@Teky
Not really :P..
@nova
🙂
Posted by dinsan on June 6, 2008 at 5:19 pm
nice one… pakuthi dahichu.. ineeem vayikkatto
Posted by Rekha on June 6, 2008 at 5:22 pm
😛
ithu njan ezhuthiyathu..avide azhikode monambathu vechatto 😛
Posted by dinsan on June 7, 2008 at 12:58 pm
Oho !!! …….. that’s why it came out really good 🙂
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