Light

Being a liar

U make me go higher

With no sign of ugliness

A mere wink

Would have made me sink

In breathless holes

As a candle

U lived for me

As a mantle

U covered me

But no where in the glorious world

I thought of u

But everywhere in the lightless world

I search for u

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18 responses to this post.

  1. wow…cool poem.. i could understand this poem…. 😛 because gave the title light 😛

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  2. 🙂

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  3. Wow! This is an amazing poem! 🙂
    Who’s the lucky guy you’re talking about? All of a sudden ppl seem to be writing about Love… 😀

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  4. @Arvind
    uhh 😛
    the title is symbolic dude :P,it doesnt exactly mean ‘light’ …. i doubt whether the title is apt 🙄

    @Vishesh 🙂

    @nihkil
    Thanks !
    u feel that so coz ur immersed in love 😉
    i wrote abt my friend only 😀

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  5. love love love.. seems like everyone in my blogroll is writing about love.

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  6. Love season or what??!! Nikhil, then you!! ssup? Btw nice poem? are you sure it was about a friend? 😛 Just curious 🙂

    Nikhil – How about a chilled beer? (after the love season i.e.) 😀

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  7. @RJ
    I’m game for beer anytime, anywhere! 😀

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  8. @xylene
    hmmm 😳
    what to say Xylene! …yeah next chance for u then 😉 ..well make it love tagg 😀 😆 :mrgreen:

    RJ
    love season is in February dude nt now ! 😛
    yeah my friend only . …well i love her so much 😀

    @ Nikhil

    hmm so now , this is the 3rd one , one at leela palace n then for 10 k hits n now for the love season 😛
    :mrgreen:

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  9. ooh..ignorance is bliss then …
    😛
    i hate to say i would never understand poems..
    😦

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  10. @Arvind
    hmm……..
    the day u understand my poem i ll give u a party man! 🙂 😛 :lol

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  11. mmm.. yet another cool poem…
    but
    “A mere wink

    Would have made me sink ”

    you sink if a girl wink?!?! 🙄

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  12. @Teky
    thanks!
    well did i mean that..shes a light u know n if she flickers for a moment then….i make this all complicated , i write with many meanings inside tht even I dont know 😀

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  13. 🙂 🙂 🙂 good one da

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  14. Thank you da 🙂

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  15. Love is in the air…. 😛

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  16. @ Amit
    n air is everywhere 😛

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  17. Thats a good meaningful poem.. keep em coming… 🙂

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  18. @Joel
    🙂

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