Being a liar
U make me go higher
With no sign of ugliness
A mere wink
Would have made me sink
In breathless holes
As a candle
U lived for me
As a mantle
U covered me
But no where in the glorious world
I thought of u
But everywhere in the lightless world
I search for u
Posted by arvind on June 22, 2008 at 9:44 pm
wow…cool poem.. i could understand this poem…. 😛 because gave the title light 😛
Posted by vishesh on June 22, 2008 at 10:34 pm
🙂
Posted by Nikhil on June 23, 2008 at 7:25 am
Wow! This is an amazing poem! 🙂
Who’s the lucky guy you’re talking about? All of a sudden ppl seem to be writing about Love… 😀
Posted by Rekha on June 23, 2008 at 8:02 am
@Arvind
uhh 😛
the title is symbolic dude :P,it doesnt exactly mean ‘light’ …. i doubt whether the title is apt 🙄
@Vishesh 🙂
@nihkil
Thanks !
u feel that so coz ur immersed in love 😉
i wrote abt my friend only 😀
Posted by Xylene on June 23, 2008 at 8:27 am
love love love.. seems like everyone in my blogroll is writing about love.
Posted by RJ on June 23, 2008 at 8:32 am
Love season or what??!! Nikhil, then you!! ssup? Btw nice poem? are you sure it was about a friend? 😛 Just curious 🙂
Nikhil – How about a chilled beer? (after the love season i.e.) 😀
Posted by Nikhil on June 23, 2008 at 3:28 pm
@RJ
I’m game for beer anytime, anywhere! 😀
Posted by Rekha on June 23, 2008 at 5:42 pm
@xylene
hmmm 😳
what to say Xylene! …yeah next chance for u then 😉 ..well make it love tagg 😀 😆
RJ
love season is in February dude nt now ! 😛
yeah my friend only . …well i love her so much 😀
@ Nikhil
hmm so now , this is the 3rd one , one at leela palace n then for 10 k hits n now for the love season 😛

Posted by arvind on June 23, 2008 at 6:44 pm
ooh..ignorance is bliss then …
😛
i hate to say i would never understand poems..
😦
Posted by Rekha on June 23, 2008 at 6:51 pm
@Arvind
hmm……..
the day u understand my poem i ll give u a party man! 🙂 😛 :lol
Posted by teky on June 23, 2008 at 9:11 pm
mmm.. yet another cool poem…
but
“A mere wink
Would have made me sink ”
you sink if a girl wink?!?! 🙄
Posted by Rekha on June 23, 2008 at 9:21 pm
@Teky
thanks!
well did i mean that..shes a light u know n if she flickers for a moment then….i make this all complicated , i write with many meanings inside tht even I dont know 😀
Posted by dinu on June 23, 2008 at 9:28 pm
🙂 🙂 🙂 good one da
Posted by Rekha on June 24, 2008 at 12:05 pm
Thank you da 🙂
Posted by Amit on June 25, 2008 at 11:16 pm
Love is in the air…. 😛
Posted by Rekha on June 25, 2008 at 11:23 pm
@ Amit
n air is everywhere 😛
Posted by joelifernandes on June 26, 2008 at 12:04 pm
Thats a good meaningful poem.. keep em coming… 🙂
Posted by Rekha on June 29, 2008 at 5:08 pm
@Joel
🙂