Story of a rose!

She woke up into one fine morning

The cool breeze dancing around

Stepped her out into her garden

Her eyes struck upon the loveliest rose,

she ever had in her garden

The pretty red rose gave her the sweetest smile

and a single thought that seems to hover in her world

Conquering her mind,actions,words,and everything 

A single thought that whispered her of only person

 

Ha! now that is a poem, oh no that was a short story I had scribbled months before without an end to the story  😀

Now I think it is better to it read out as a poem than a story  😛

what do you think..story or a poem ?

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21 responses to this post.

  1. The poem is good enough to compensate the story 😛 btw thanks for visiting my blog…

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  2. poem! 🙂 love the new theme.

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  3. Poem or story, either way a good read 🙂

    Keep going 🙂

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  4. This is too short to be a short story. A poem it is.

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  5. I will say this as a poetic story which is beautiful. A nice read:)

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  6. Its a prose…its a rose 😀 …its a story…its a precis…no its a poem !!! Or are you changing the title now ???

    well written rekha, but who is that person??? tell us…tell us…

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  7. Poem after a long time .. 😛
    cool ..

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  8. @ Rajni
    hehehe …Ur always Welcome!:)

    @ Reema
    thanks! 🙂

    @ Kido
    Hi… Welcome to my blog!
    n thanks! 🙂

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  9. @Leafless

    Welcome to my blog! 🙂
    yeah …but i havent completed the story!

    @Kanagu
    hehehe…dat sounds really gud! 🙂

    @ Vimmuuu
    ‘prose n a rose’…hahaha 😀
    sssHHH! dats a secret 😉

    @ Arvind
    :P…yeah after 3 long months..I ve posted one!

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  10. Must say a poem 🙂 Its lovely. Thanks for wishing me 🙂
    Have a nice time.

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  11. Posted by artisticked on January 15, 2009 at 5:58 pm

    What ever it may b….!!……It’zzz beautiful…!!….Nice post mate….3 cheers…!!

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  12. @ Dinesh

    thank u……..thanks a lot!!:)

    @ Artisticked
    thanks…!! 🙂

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  13. Poem! Story! Poem! Whatever!!! Enthaa oru chaanchaattam ? 😛

    Loooooove yur header!

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  14. I would say its a rhythamic story which could be made into a song 🙂

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  15. Poem! That is lovely 🙂

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  16. beautiful poem 🙂

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  17. @ scorpria
    thaaaaaaaaaanks!! hehehe 😀

    @ Sahaja
    Welcome to my blog! 🙂
    ha dat sound good ! 🙂

    @Joel
    thanks 🙂

    @Remya
    🙂

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  18. Roses Are Red,
    Violets Are Blue,
    Blah Blah Blah,
    Where Are You? 😀

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  19. ministory ?

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  20. @ Nikhil
    Roses are nt always red :mrgreen:

    @ Dinu
    hoho we need a ministry for poems ! :mrgreen:

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  21. Posted by mithun on June 26, 2009 at 5:17 pm

    the poem is so simple keep writing something new about kerala… that too about kottayam, i like dat place a lot…

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