She woke up into one fine morning
The cool breeze dancing around
Stepped her out into her garden
Her eyes struck upon the loveliest rose,
she ever had in her garden
The pretty red rose gave her the sweetest smile
and a single thought that seems to hover in her world
Conquering her mind,actions,words,and everything
A single thought that whispered her of only person
Ha! now that is a poem, oh no that was a short story I had scribbled months before without an end to the story 😀
Now I think it is better to it read out as a poem than a story 😛
what do you think..story or a poem ?
My desert which is always green 
Posted by rajni on January 8, 2009 at 10:47 pm
The poem is good enough to compensate the story 😛 btw thanks for visiting my blog…
Posted by Reema on January 8, 2009 at 10:47 pm
poem! 🙂 love the new theme.
Posted by Kido on January 8, 2009 at 11:35 pm
Poem or story, either way a good read 🙂
Keep going 🙂
Posted by leafless on January 9, 2009 at 1:14 am
This is too short to be a short story. A poem it is.
Posted by Kanagu on January 9, 2009 at 1:51 am
I will say this as a poetic story which is beautiful. A nice read:)
Posted by vimal on January 9, 2009 at 4:53 am
Its a prose…its a rose 😀 …its a story…its a precis…no its a poem !!! Or are you changing the title now ???
well written rekha, but who is that person??? tell us…tell us…
Posted by arvind on January 9, 2009 at 6:01 pm
Poem after a long time .. 😛
cool ..
Posted by allirekha on January 10, 2009 at 10:40 pm
@ Rajni
hehehe …Ur always Welcome!:)
@ Reema
thanks! 🙂
@ Kido
Hi… Welcome to my blog!
n thanks! 🙂
Posted by allirekha on January 10, 2009 at 10:44 pm
@Leafless
Welcome to my blog! 🙂
yeah …but i havent completed the story!
@Kanagu
hehehe…dat sounds really gud! 🙂
@ Vimmuuu
‘prose n a rose’…hahaha 😀
sssHHH! dats a secret 😉
@ Arvind
:P…yeah after 3 long months..I ve posted one!
Posted by dinesh1201 on January 15, 2009 at 10:52 am
Must say a poem 🙂 Its lovely. Thanks for wishing me 🙂
Have a nice time.
Posted by artisticked on January 15, 2009 at 5:58 pm
What ever it may b….!!……It’zzz beautiful…!!….Nice post mate….3 cheers…!!
Posted by allirekha on January 15, 2009 at 7:46 pm
@ Dinesh
thank u……..thanks a lot!!:)
@ Artisticked
thanks…!! 🙂
Posted by scorpria on January 16, 2009 at 9:46 pm
Poem! Story! Poem! Whatever!!! Enthaa oru chaanchaattam ? 😛
Loooooove yur header!
Posted by Sahaja on January 17, 2009 at 1:04 pm
I would say its a rhythamic story which could be made into a song 🙂
Posted by Joel on January 18, 2009 at 4:01 pm
Poem! That is lovely 🙂
Posted by Remya on January 21, 2009 at 11:23 pm
beautiful poem 🙂
Posted by allirekha on January 24, 2009 at 10:35 am
@ scorpria
thaaaaaaaaaanks!! hehehe 😀
@ Sahaja
Welcome to my blog! 🙂
ha dat sound good ! 🙂
@Joel
thanks 🙂
@Remya
🙂
Posted by Nikhil on January 28, 2009 at 3:45 pm
Roses Are Red,
Violets Are Blue,
Blah Blah Blah,
Where Are You? 😀
Posted by dinu on February 2, 2009 at 10:00 pm
ministory ?
Posted by allirekha on February 23, 2009 at 12:29 pm
@ Nikhil
Roses are nt always red
@ Dinu
hoho we need a ministry for poems !
Posted by mithun on June 26, 2009 at 5:17 pm
the poem is so simple keep writing something new about kerala… that too about kottayam, i like dat place a lot…